Ok so these are MY lyrics. I was upset a few days ago. Felt lonely. But hey, that is life. Anyway, critique these and tell me how they are. I need to know.
Be honest about it. No matter if you are my friend and you are just being nice or whatever.
THANKS A MILLION!!

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Never Again

I walked the dead side of life.
The Hell side of Heaven.
You thought you could harm.
Or hurt me.
You are the greatest mistake I have ever had.
Between us only, I truly died when you said I do.

[Chorus x 2]
Never again.
Will you break my heart.
This is the last time you justify you reasons for hurting me.
When I was down, you screwed me over.
Forget you.
Forget me.
I’m dead.
For now.
[End chorus]

Fuck you and your reasons.
You are dead to me.
No need to return home.
You won’t get in.
Nothing without the key, will you ever enter.
Burn in Hell for all I care.
Rot in your grave.
I will never visit you in the afterlife.

[Chorus]

No more sorrow.
You deceived me.
No reason for you live any longer.
You’ve over stayed your welcome.
Leave and never come back.